I.INTRODUCTION
a. Slums, A really bad place to live in
b. Slums have are an area where the poorest people live in harsh environment.
c. Slums have a negative effect because they have poor houses are really dirty and are full of diseases.
II. DEFENDABLE PONT 1
a. People that live in slums have poor housing that one of the negative effects
b. Support Evidence
i: quote
ii: paraphrase
c.Explanation
d. Transition
III. DEFENDABLE POINT 2
a. Slums are so dirty and un healthy
b. Supporting evidence
i: Quote
ii. Paraphrase
VI. DEFENDABLE POINT 3
a. Finally slums are also full of diseases that spread like wild fire
b. Supporting Evidence
c. Explanation
d. Transition to conclusion
V. Conclusions
a. hook
b. Slums are a negative effect in the world because they have poor living and housing and it is very dirty and full of diseases it is a very hard life.
c. Summarize Arguments
d. leave the reader with the same thing to question about.
Anthony, you needed to include the quotes, evidence, transitions, etc. Instead, you only mentioned them.
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