Tuesday 25 October 2011

Introduction Paragraph

Slums are where the poorest of the poor live in bad health conditions.a slum is where a town of the poorest people live with no good conditions at all.slums have a negative effect because they have poor houses , are really dirty , and are full of diseases that spread like wild fire. the main problem in slums are diseases that over run them.

Thursday 20 October 2011

SLUMS OUTINE.

I.INTRODUCTION
a. Slums, A really bad place to live in
b. Slums have are an area where the poorest people live in harsh environment.
c. Slums have a negative effect because they have poor houses are really dirty and are full of diseases.

II. DEFENDABLE PONT 1
a. People that live in slums have poor housing that one of the negative effects
b. Support Evidence
i: quote
ii: paraphrase
c.Explanation
d. Transition

III. DEFENDABLE POINT 2
a. Slums are so dirty and un healthy
b. Supporting evidence
i: Quote
ii. Paraphrase

VI. DEFENDABLE POINT 3
a. Finally slums are also full of diseases that spread like wild fire
b. Supporting Evidence
c. Explanation
d. Transition to conclusion

V. Conclusions
a. hook
b. Slums are  a negative effect in the world because they have poor living and housing and it is very dirty and full of diseases it is a very hard life.
c. Summarize Arguments
d. leave the reader with the same thing to question about.